I entered mine just for fun. My WIP is far from done, but I like my first chapter.
This is a paragraph from my novel with the working title "The Shrouded Star." Let me know what you think.
In a certain kingdom, in a certain realm, on the eve of the Nahe'dra rising, a cloud of smoke whisked across the night sky beneath a crescent moon. Black piercing eyes searched the inward curves of snow covered alps. Sharp teeth appeared as lips parted in a fearsome grin. Abruptly the cloud descended into the uninhabited depths of a dark forest. Twigs snapped and leaves rustled as a fierce wind swept through the trees.
“She has arrived at last,” a voice whispered in the darkness.
“Why is she making so much noise? It's enough to wake the dead,” whispered another.
“Maybe that's the idea.”
6 comments:
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*high five*
I dig!
*fingers crossed*
I hope you win!
Absolutely wonderful... which is why I clicked over here from Nathan's page to see who you are. :-)
JuJu - I dig you *high five*
Hey, Mary, I just caught up with your posts at myblog. Thanks for saying hi.
I got a kick out of the fact you thought my "entry" over there was fun. I did too.
But, I deleted the ones I sent in because, yes, I was trying to be funny... and I realized that wasn't fair to Nathan, nor to the terrifically good writers (like yourself) who were entering the contest.
Trust me, you're in the running. :-)
Oh yes, this is definitely ready. Everything is clear and vivid in my mind. Love it, love it, love it!
Mary-
Absolutely love it! You are shooting for the stars girl. I can't wait to look up and see you there!
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